16 Replies to “Longing”

  1. The very core of your writing while appearing reasonable originally, did not settle perfectly with me personally after some time. Somewhere throughout the sentences you managed to make me a believer but just for a short while. I still have a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do nicely to fill in those breaks. In the event you actually can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly end up being impressed.

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