Posted on February 27, 2018February 25, 2018 by Catherine ArcolioThey Never Mind a floating snow that drifts about and never settles down Like this:Like Loading...
I bet they have thick winter coats. My horse is starting to shed his, but these guys will need theirs a bit longer. Lovely. Loading... Reply
Your snow photos haunt me — in a good sense: they help me see through, reminding me of possibilities that often remain submerged in the sunlight. Loading... Reply
There’s a line to end the verse… but I can’t seem to get it good enough…
I bet they have thick winter coats. My horse is starting to shed his, but these guys will need theirs a bit longer. Lovely.
I think your verses are perfect. 3, 3, and 4? It reflects the peace of the picture.
They snuggle, kind of hunker down and their coats keep getting longer and thicker….
Your snow photos haunt me — in a good sense: they help me see through, reminding me of possibilities that often remain submerged in the sunlight.
You’re doing the poetry of snow…