White Flame

Amidst all the green
a single white flame flickers
lighting the path.

6 Replies to “White Flame”

Iris Orpi – Poet, novelist, educator, topophiliac, coffee addict.

irisoniris says:

June 25, 2012 at 6:38 am

Exquisite image and the short, flickering mental image was arresting. Thank you.

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1. Catherine Arcolio – near the North East Kingdom, USA
  
  seedbud says:
  
  June 25, 2012 at 7:01 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Jnana Hodson – New England, USA – In downsizing to a remote fishing village in Downeast Maine, this eclectic writer feels everything's coming together.

Jnana Hodson says:

June 25, 2012 at 8:27 am

Turn around
for the thunder.

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aethor – Writes and attempts to avoid using the passive mood.

lukerian says:

June 25, 2012 at 9:51 pm

Wow. It’s amazing what you can do with two mediums, and when they come together…exquisite.
Not to mention the imagery…wow.

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Geraldine Helen Hartman – I am a freelance writer, poet, artisan, product reviewer and award-winning cookbook author. I am the author of numerous books and eBooks, in a variety of genres, including: -Laughing AT the Grim Reaper! Gems of Wisdom for Aging Well -The Groovy Green Kitchen (Volume 1 and Volume 2) -Third Chapter, Second Chance (a mid-life romance) -Haiku Reflections: The Four Seasons (Volumes I, II and III and IV) My titles (in Kindle and print book formats) are available at all Amazon sites.

Geraldine says:

June 27, 2012 at 2:43 pm

very nice!

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jane tims – Canada – Hi. I am a writer and biologist. I am also interested in history and community sustainability. I write mostly poetry. My training is in botany, so I often include plants in my poems. Visit me at www.nichepoetryandprose.wordpress.com

jane tims says:

July 2, 2012 at 7:45 am

Hi. I agree, the word ‘flicker’ is very apt. Lovely! Jane

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